Hey everybody I am going to tell you a poem I just wrote. It's called the Sun. Here it is!
The Sun
That sun, that sun
That thing that is the sun
That wonderful thing
That is bright in the sky
That sun I think in heaven.
Well of course it's not heaven
You would burn in one second
But still, when I look at the sun
It looks just like heaven
But if I am really seeing it
Then you would be seeing it too!
What am I thinking?
I'm saying the sun looks like heaven
But really you would burn in one second!
Am I turning crazy?
Is my brain turning hazy?
What am I thinking?
I'm crazy! I'm crazy!
Everyone here!
Can you hear me?
I'm crazy!
I think the sun is heaven
But you'd burn in one second!
What am I saying god?
I fill like a pod!
A crazy lazy pod!
Now breathe I say now breathe.
What drama! What rhythm! What fun! I'm just amazed, pip!
ReplyDeleteCould it be that was your first official poem? It will go down in history, my sweet poet. You should make a collection and we could publish them in a book with pictures like we made for Granny! xxlove, mummy
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a great idea mom!
ReplyDeleteAnd dad, I think your comments are the best and your posts!
Lily